i hate idiots. anyhoo.
The art's not bad. Unique, and you seem to know what you're doing. Your shading can be off occasionally. At times I thought those guys had stripes at the bottom of their pants. I thought everything looked better in black and white, but y'know, I like black and white.
I didn't care much for the humor. Computer jokes just seem lame to me. You did well to eliminate the leet from your comic though. Either you have too many inside jokes (Why's that bag leaking? Why kill the paper clip? Who the blossom is Steker?) or I am just not your audience. Possibly both.
Too much filler. It's fine to do just gags and have no plot, but you need to have real gags. Some guy rolling around on a chair is not a successful strip. Maybe you should cut down on your updates. You don't need a strip everyday, and if your quality goes up, people would except fewer updates.
Your comic is well drawn and feels like something that might be sydicated. Whether you feel that's a good thing or not I'll leave to you.
i won't say who said this.. i will mention that it came from keenspace's forums.
okay.. should i make it clear to people that there is almost no plot? probably. but if you read past the first comic and still assume there's a plot? in the words of the architect.. "please." and color versus non-color.. that's opinion. but did i not! DID! I! NOT! state in my news (blog) WHY ian was rolling around! i said from the START that most comics need some sort of explanation, but these morons don't read. no, i am not angry. i just hate people.
yes. one other thing. is my quality NOT good?
oh, and by the way. the way the site works now is, every new comic has its days' posts to go with it.. but you cannot look up posts alongside archived comics. this is not php. so keep in mind, to look up a date's posts, look on the main page, down at the bottom of the frame for the blog archive link. click on that and find the day's date that you're looking for.
'kay?
